譯好 SaaS 定價頁中文文案，再求職

Most EN→ZH work on a SaaS pricing page is invisible to the buyer: they can't read Chinese, so they can't judge the output — and "send me a sample" rarely happens.

So for a few SaaS companies I picked one page, translated it, and published the result side by side on my own server. Unofficial preview, not affiliated with or endorsed by them:

https://promptgeam.com/preview/apitemplate-5kqdcaphc6/

Three sentences quoted from their pricing page, original on top, Chinese underneath. No logo, no images, no full-page copy. noindex, 30-day expiry, removed on request.

One line, and why the machine version reads wrong

Original:

We offer two models for you to generate content, only pay for what you really need

Machine-ish Chinese:

我们提供两种模式为您生成内容，只为您真正需要的付费

Ours:

内容生成有两种模式，你只为真正用到的部分付费。

Three things changed:

The verb carries the meaning. 提供 is what a form does. 内容生成有两种模式 states a fact about the product — Chinese pricing copy prefers the product as the subject.
"really need" is not 真正需要. 真正需要的付费 leaves the reader asking "need what?"; 真正用到的部分 closes the loop.
Two "you"s collapse into one. Keeping both 为您 and 您 makes the line read like a translated contract, not a product page.

What I check first on any Chinese pricing page

Is the unit restated? "Credits" becomes 额度, but the reader still needs to know how much one 额度 buys.
Does the sentence survive with the price removed? If the number is doing the work, the copy is dead weight.
Would a Chinese founder say it out loud? Legal-sounding Chinese is the loudest machine signal there is.

I do this for a living, one page at a time, so treat the link as a work sample rather than an argument.

If you ship a SaaS: what would you want to see in Chinese first — pricing, docs, or the onboarding emails?